The crosshatching on Alex's chin in the second panel kinda makes it look like he's growing some facial hair. But otherwise, I like the effect it brings to the characters. The Lich in the first panel is especially awesome.
Terrible puns are terrible yet still funny XD
I seem to be your spelling vanguard lately >_> and I know it's minor, but did you mean *Villain*?
Also, about the shading, it looks good, and there is an obvious light source in the 3rd panel, but considering shading generally goes hand in hand with a light source and you aren't utilising light sources per se as mentioned in previous strip... how are you calculating the shading, randomly? 0_o
I dunno, ignore me and do your own thing of course if you want to =P
@ Zero Signal- I absolutely appreciate your input on my spelling errors and my light source conundrum!!
LOL I had my ma-in-law review the silly script before I used it. What a drag! Villain is one of my favorite words! I will indeed correct the mistake. :D
About my light source, I did some more thinking about it and while I am still ways away from mastering proper shading, I like the idea of a generic ambient light source. As far as the direction of said imaginary glow, I pick a direction and try to stick with it.
I don't know how much I can honestly thank you for asking me about things like this and keeping me honest and working hard to improve. We will be out of the ruins soon enough but back into a dungeon before we know it, so I will have lots of oppurtunities to spruce up the believability!XD
5.00
Posted by mandu
Man, I love to draw.
Ta da! Oh, I WILL enjoy getting better at this. Enjoy today's strip and tell me what you think! :D